Monday 4 March 2013

What have we been up to so far this term?

Well Mr Peevor arrived with a Bucketful of Dinosaurs and we wrote our own stories about Dinosaurs. have a look at Joe's and Josh's below. They have used some really good WOW words.

Dinosaurs and Volcanoes

A volcano exploded in the Dino City, a T-Rex loudly shouted really loud, he was frightened. It is terrifying and the Earth is glowing everywhere and it is on fire. rocks fell down and they are burning some baby dinosaurs. T-Rex came and scooped them up, they were saved.

Joe.

Volcano Danger

Pterodactyl smashed into a castle and a volcano exploded. The dinosaurgot scorched from hot rocks. The castle is broken on the floor and lava covers it. He flew up into the sky dodging the rocks; he flew over the hot hissing sea to the hills where he was safe.

Josh S

1 comment:

  1. I read josh s it was good there were some really good wow
    words in it.
    FROM MIA

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