5 Sentence challenge

Isabella

I like New York, it's fun because lots and lots and loads and loads of people are with you. In New York you see boat races and lots of things. The statue lights up the way for millions of new people coming to new York to have fun, fun, fun, fun. There are fireworks banging and crashing and thundering in the sky. There are lots of buildings with lights on.

Tilly

I can see the Statue of Liberty. I can see fireworks booming. Boats are sailing whoosh, whoosh. There are tall buildings. There is one funny building that looks like a waterfall.

Daniel

Boats sailing in a boat race and there are red boats, white boats, one red boat almost in the water. The Statue of Liberty is holding a torch to light the way for the thousands of travellers who travelled for miles. One building looks like a battery and it's really strange! There are colourful fireworks that CA BOOM! CA BANG!Buildings are lit up so that means people are there.

Lily-Mae

A water tube is filling with water. The Statue of Liberty is welcoming everyone to New York. The boats are racing, which one will be first, second or last?The buildings of New York are used for sleeping in at night. The fireworks are shiny and sparkly.

Ellie

The city is so beautiful I would like to sleep there for a couple of days. Then I would like to go on a real sailing boat. I would like to live there. The fireworks are loud. The statue is very beautiful.

Vinnie

I can see sailing boats. I can see hotels with lights on. I can see the statue of Liberty. I can see colourful fireworks. I can see a flying helicopter.

Megan's new kitten

Look at Smude. isn't he cute?

Lots of visitors!

Well I haven't even gone home yet and lots of you have visited the Blog. It's lovely to see. Thanks to Summer, Isabella, Georgia and Harry.

Holly's Senses Poetry!

Senses Poems

These last few weeks we have been working on some fabulous poetry, using our senses. We are due to finish them by tomorrow, so keep a look out and comment on your favourite ones. We hope you enjoy them. Love Holly class x

Megan's 5 Sentence challenge

The vet is very happy because there are lots of people and he likes being busy. There is alot of noise from all the different animals. There are mums chatting. Babies moaning. There are animals being sick and hurt animals.

Maisy's 5 Sentence Challenge

Noises are everywhere in the vets. Curly haired ladies are chatting. Dogs are howling and cats are meowing at the vet. The vet is happy and proud of himself. There are lots of pictures on the walls.

Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge

There are lots of people in the vets. There are two ladies arguing. The vet is very busy. Children are waiting to go in. There are lots of pictures in the room.

Georgia's 5 Sentence Challenge

Ladies are chatting. Doctors are smiling. Pets are moaning. Men are complaining. Children are waiting.

Daisy's 5 Sentence challenge

The ladies are sitting and chatting. The dogs are barking because they are sad. The pigs are grunting because there having babies. The vet is happy because he is going to get loads of money. The cats are meowing because they are cross.

Rocket Readers

Well done all the Rocket Readers who have reached the 3rd Star. Only 2 more weeks and you will be on a Prize Planet. Keep it up.

Blog Visitor

Thank you Summer for taking time to look at all our work.