Wednesday 23 May 2012
Isabella
I like New York, it's fun because lots and lots and loads and loads of people are with you. In New York you see boat races and lots of things. The statue lights up the way for millions of new people coming to new York to have fun, fun, fun, fun. There are fireworks banging and crashing and thundering in the sky. There are lots of buildings with lights on.
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Well done Isabella for really looking closely at the picture and imagining what it would be like! That is what writing for 5SC is all about. Well done!
ReplyDeletewell done I especially like the bit "the fireworks crashed and banged."very good spelling aswell.harvey,chestnut class
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