Wednesday 23 May 2012

Daniel

Boats sailing in a boat race and there are red boats, white boats, one red boat almost in the water. The Statue of Liberty is holding a torch to light the way for the thousands of travellers who travelled for miles. One building looks like a battery and it's really strange! There are colourful fireworks that CA BOOM! CA BANG!Buildings are lit up so that means people are there.
Posted by at 09:19

3 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner24 May 2012 at 12:11

    Daniel - I am so impressed with these sentences because they make a real story.Did you find out about the Statue of Liberty because lots of people did go past her when they arrived in America. I do hope you will write for the 5SC again!

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  2. Mrs Halford (Team 100WC)29 May 2012 at 05:47

    Hello Daniel, I was also very impressed when I read this. What super sentences. I think that you would be able to manage the 100 wc really well if you wanted.Keep on writing :O)

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  3. Mrs Hampson30 May 2012 at 09:58

    Daniel - what a great piece of writing. It is very descriptive and makes me feel like I want to be on one of the boats sailing past the Statue of Liberty. Keep up the good work. It is lovely to be able to read yours and your friends stories and writing on Holly's Blog.

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