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Wednesday 23 May 2012
Vinnie
I can see sailing boats.
I can see hotels with lights on.
I can see the statue of Liberty.
I can see colourful fireworks.
I can see a flying helicopter.
Hello Vinnie! These are great sentences and I love the way you have used your imagination in deciding that some of the buildings are hotels. Next time, pick a different word to start some of the sentences. That would make then EVEN better!
Hello Vinnie!
ReplyDeleteThese are great sentences and I love the way you have used your imagination in deciding that some of the buildings are hotels. Next time, pick a different word to start some of the sentences. That would make then EVEN better!
well done vinnie for being put forward for the 5 sentence challege. love from mum and dad x
ReplyDeletewow Vinnie. I really want to visit New York after reading this. Well done! From Daisy's mum.
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