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Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Daisy's 5 Sentence challenge
The ladies are sitting and chatting. The dogs are barking because they are sad. The pigs are grunting because there having babies. The vet is happy because he is going to get loads of money. The cats are meowing because they are cross.
Hello Holly Class i love daisys five sentence challenge it is so good i could read it thousands of times.
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This is a really good 5 sentence challenge! The bit about the vet making money made me laugh!
ReplyDeleteWow! that is a great 5 sentence challenge! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the entertainment!
ReplyDeleteYou have really used some excellent observation skills Daisy in these sentences. It is so good to see your work being shared on 5SC!
ReplyDeleteHello Holly Class I want you to give daisy a big clap because I lovvve daisys five sentence chalange
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To Daisy your poem is very very very very very very very very very very very good.Love from Isabella xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
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