Wednesday, 23 May 2012

Tilly

I can see the Statue of Liberty. I can see fireworks booming. Boats are sailing whoosh, whoosh. There are tall buildings. There is one funny building that looks like a waterfall.
Posted by at 09:23

3 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner24 May 2012 at 12:12

    I love the way you have told your reader what noise you may hear and the fact that a building is like a waterfall Tilly. That is called using similes and is an advanced writing skill. Very well done!

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  2. MEGAN29 May 2012 at 09:56

    Very good Tilly.
    from Megan

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  3. Michael Neath & Carla Thomas2 July 2012 at 11:56

    Lovely work, darling, well done! From a proud Mummy and Daddy xx

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