A water tube is filling with water. The Statue of Liberty is welcoming everyone to New York. The boats are racing, which one will be first, second or last?The buildings of New York are used for sleeping in at night. The fireworks are shiny and sparkly.
These sentences are grand Lily-Mae! My favourite where you ask a question of your reader - excellent. Thank you for joining the 5SC!
ReplyDeleteI love your New York work Lily Mae.
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